The garden elephant was out of control, spraying water everywhere while Mrs. Babbity rushed to call the manufacturer.

“It’s gone mad,” she sobbed.

“Yes, ma’am. That happens to some of the older models. They forget that they aren’t in the war any longer. Just be glad it has a hose up that trunk. Ten years ago, those would have been bullets.”

“But what do I do? It’s trampled the marigolds, soaked the African Violets, knocked down the fence, and run away!”

“Yes, ma’am. We’ve dispatched a disposal team to your location. They should arrive within forty five minutes.”

“In forty five minutes, that thing will be halfway to the interstate. It’s going to destroy… hello?” The line had gone dead. Mrs. Babbity raced out front to pursue the mammoth down the street. “Look out! It’s run amok!” she screeched.

It broadsided a car parked by the side of the road, and though the car was badly dented, the elephant remained undamaged. Then it wheeled about and came running at Mrs. Babbity, who dashed behind a tree. Had the machine swerved to follow her, the tree would have been insubstantial, but it made instead straight for a game of stickball taking place at the end of the cul-de-sac. Instead of being gored, all Mrs. Babbity got was an incidental soaking.

“Look out!” Mrs. Babbity clamored from behind her tree. “There are children!” The robot ignored her and lumbered on, showering everything within its radius as it passed.

Bobby Winhoe stood on the pitcher’s mound, which was actually last year’s calendar. He heard the racket behind him, but didn’t take his eyes off the batter. He wound up, and he pitched, a hard fast ball, right across home plate. The ball connected with Lukey Williams’ stick with a crack and sailed over Bobby’s head. Bobby turned to follow its progress. “Dang, Lukey! You hit another…” And then the ball struck the elephant in the eye. It stopped where it stood, spraying its fountain into the air. Bobby looked around. None of the other players remained on the field. It was just him, Lukey, and Shrimp, the catcher.

“Woah,” Lukey said. “We’re in some kind of trouble now, aren’t we Bobby? Those elephants are expensive.”

But in the distance, they could all hear Old Lady Babbity screaming, “You’re heroes! You’re heroes! You boys are heroes!”

Then everyone went inside to wait for the disposal team. It might have been nice to play in the cool water, but the elephant’s good eye, the one without a baseball embedded in it, had gone from beneficent gray to malignant red, and nobody who saw it wanted to remain long in its presence.

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Amok — 10 Comments

  1. Your imagination is amazing. Mrs. Babbity, what a fabulous name. A tin mechanical elephat run amok with a good red eye? Incredibly good.

  2. Crazy! I would not like to meet a rampaging elephant, robotic or not. I guess at least if it’s a robot then it can be felled by a baseball. I want to know now why these shooting elephants were invented. 🙂

  3. Damn, that was imaginative! Cool, though I kept switching between Flintstone’s world (real elephant I saw in my mind at the beginning) and sci-fi- world (hose up its nose, and it being called a machine near the middle, then a robot.) I settled on sci-fi before the end. Yes, cool!

  4. I swear to God, that was brilliant! How do you come up with this stuff? That was a fun read. I was with Mrs. Babbity each and every amok-running step!

  5. Great stuff. I love going off the rails like that sometimes. Once you’ve broken a certain number of realities, it’s just an awesome grab bag of what-ifs after that. Any story line becomes plausible and nothing is ever impossible. It’s true freedom. It’s why I love being a writer. No matter how caged we are in the tangible, with a pen we are truly free.