Loki’s son

Thor, Sif, and Loki walked into the bar.

“Oh fuck.” It was twenty minutes to closing and the place was deserted, except for the bartender. She snapped her fingers and the sign flipped from open to closed. “I told you to stay out of here.”

“Relax, Sigyn,” said Sif. “He’s with us.” Sif  shook her hair loose from her cloak, and four beer steins sprang onto the bar. “What ‘s on tap?”

Sigyn stared at the mugs for a few seconds. “The Sam Adams isn’t bad.” She regarded Loki with lowered eyebrows, while he looked at everything in the room except his wife. She turned to Sif. “Why would it matter who he came in here with? The Allfather himself could bring him, and I wouldn’t want him back.”

Loki turned and walked to the door. “You see?” he said to Thor. “I told you, she’s not ready.”

“Sit down and tell me what you’re doing here.” Sigyn curled her hand into a fist and pulled her husband into a chair without moving near him. Then she filled the steins and carried them to the table. She nodded to Thor and Sif. “Sit,” she told them.

Loki said, “I have spoken with Fenrir. He is the last…”

“I do not wish to hear about your other children. Your living children.”

Behind the bar, a dog whined. More wolf than hound, it padded up behind Loki and nudged his hand. He looked down and slowly stroked its soft fur. Sigyn glared, but did not speak. Loki got out of his chair and knelt stroking the animal’s back and finally holding its face so their eyes met. “Is there any of you left in there Valí?” The dog whined and tugged its face away.

Sigyn said, “Some. He knows you anyway.”

“And at least like this he doesn’t blame me.”

“And if he did, at least he’d be alive to do it.” Sigyn took a long pull of beer.

Thor said, “Enough.  You are angry. We will be brief.”

“How long did I sit beside you?” Sigyn half rose. “How many years did I hold that basin above my head and listen to you scream when the venom struck you because the basin was full and wanted for emptying?”

Loki rubbed one scarred cheek, but didn’t answer.

“Only for you to rise up and join with others who were not your wife. We will meet on the battlefield, Loki, and I will…”

Enough,” Thor repeated. “Loki, speak your mission.”

Loki rose and then sat back in his chair. From under the table, he produced a duffel. He said, “I have Narfi’s head, body, and soul. Every one of those others gave me something. Hel collected his essence for me. Fenrir got me his bones, and  Jörmungandr found his sinews. They did this because I am their father, and because I was their father before I ever met you.

“The others, the ones I went to after I was freed, they did not cooperate for love alone. The stallion gave me Narfi’s skin and I paid for it by becoming a mare and bearing his daughter. That daughter is Sleipinir, and because I am her mother, she drew out Narfi’s hair from the earth where it was buried.   The troll for whom I was a milkmaid found me his two eyes and rendered them whole again. If I have betrayed you, I am sorry. But I am carrying our second son in this bag. He may yet wake to blame his father.”

While Loki spoke, the others drained their beer, and Sigyn went to the bar to draw them more. She didn’t return to the table. She stood at the tap shaking her head. “Narfi?” she said, “In that bag?”

Under the table, the dog whined again, then got up and went to the door. It reared up on both legs and opened the door.  Loki said, “Stay Valí. You aren’t at fault. You were made to kill him, and it is my guilt to bear until Ragnarök.”  Valí dropped back down on all fours and padded outside, closing the door with a rear foot. Loki shook his head. “I need his guts, Sigyn. I need Narfi’s guts. Will you give them to me?”

Outside, Valí barked sharply, and something crashed against the outside wall. Sigyn ran to the door, and when she opened it, Valí came back in, a broken-necked raven clutched in his jaw. He dropped it at Sigyn’s feet.

She spun on her heel and waved Loki under the table. He seized the duffel and dove out of the way. Thor took Loki’s beer for himself and Sif flicked her hand so that one of the other three steins vanished behind the bar, leaving only two foaming drinks waiting for Sigyn to carry them back to the table.

The raven jerked its neck back into alignment with its body, then jumped to its feet, and Sigyn scooped it up. It struggled in her grip, but she did not let go. She turned and held it high in the room. Sif and Thor both nodded to it as its gaze swept over the table. Sigyn turned the bird to face her. “See?” she told it. “My brother-in-law and his wife have come to down beer with me on the anniversary. Go back and tell the Allfather there is nothing to see in my bar.” She flung it out the door. Valí thumped his tail against the wall. “Good boy,” she said.

Loki came out from under the table and took his seat once more.

“Must it be tonight?” Sigyn asked.

“Tonight or this night next year, or the one after that, or…”

“The anniversary of his death, then.”

“Yes.”

“You will guard the doors?” Sigyn looked to Thor and Sif, who nooded. “And you,” she looked to Valí, “will try not to eat him this time?” The wolf dog whined. Sigyn turned to Loki. “Then come,” she said. “The guts are downstairs. But I have not forgiven you. And I will not. Not until Ragnarök.

For the Scriptic prompt exchange this week, Eric Storch gave me this prompt: Thor, Loki and Sif walk into a bar and the bartender says….

I gave Michael this prompt: The narrow world exploded with colors.

 

Rider

“Fit!” I ordered the tire gauge. But it popped off the valve with a hissing sigh. My bike tire was still malleable even after three go-rounds with the air hose. I didn’t really need to read the PSI to know  I was doing it wrong.  “Here, you’ve actually got a car flat.” I handed the air hose to a man waiting beside me.

“Take your time,” he said.  But he didn’t hand it back. Instead he shook it. “There’s the problem. It’s broken. There isn’t enough pressure to force the inner tube to inflate.”

I glared at the machine for deceiving me with its hiccupping hum. “Do you know anyplace else close we could go?”

“I’m going to try the Chevron over on Atlanta Highway.”

“Thanks. I guess I will, too.” I stuffed my gauge in my pocket and checked the straps on the car’s bike rack, then followed him out of the parking lot.

It was the first cool day in September, and the sun was dipping lower in the sky. Two stoplights and a U-turn later, I decided I could have pedaled to the next gas station faster than I had driven the car. I watched the man kneel beside his vehicle then get up again with asphalt stains on his khakis.

“Good luck!” He waved as he pulled out.

Right away, I could tell the difference. This machine positively juddered with pressurized energy. Its hose was stiff and hard to manage, and when I applied it to my bike’s valve stem, it emitted a satisfying whish before I completed the connection with a tiny thup.

The tire swelled, but then it twanged and popped over the rim on one side. “Seriously?” The sky was turning orange and pink now. I was running out of daylight. I set down the air hose and got ready to drain the air out.

“ ‘Scuse me.” A woman picked up the hose. Without looking at me, she said, “Do you mind if I take a turn while you fix that?”

“No. Um. Not a problem.”

I fiddled with the valve and listened to the air blast. When a sufficient amount had drained out, I reset the rim and waited. The pinks and oranges were fading to grays by the time the woman finished. Couldn’t she tell I was in a hurry? Wasn’t it obvious that I had only dashed out to fill my tires so I could take a quick ride around the block? Could she not see my window of opportunity for that ride closing as the rays disappeared from the sky?

Finally, she drove away. “Thanks,” she said as she pulled out. It sounded like an afterthought.

I jammed the air back in place, but the valve retreated into the rim. “Really?” I looked around to make sure the parking lot was empty before I set the hose down again. When I yanked the valve back out, something else tupped loose, like maybe the inner tube had been kinked, possibly even folded up over the rim’s edge.

By the time both tires were filled, the colors had left the sky. Twilight had settled, and full dark would follow within minutes. Once I repeated the U-turn and stoplight routine, then drove through the neighborhood to my house, it would be too dark for my ride. And the neighborhood was right there, just exactly behind me, across two deserted parking lots. “Damn it, I could bike faster.”

“I’m sorry?”

I hadn’t seen or heard the other car arrive, but now a woman stood beside her car holding her own tire gauge. “Here.” I handed her the hose. “I’m through.”

I threw the car into reverse, but instead of pulling out into traffic, I drove around behind the gas station and parked next to its car wash. I unhooked my bike from the rack and wrestled it to the ground. I could bike it faster, and Scott could bring me back to pick up the car when I got home. With a final glance to the sky, I set out walking across the grass between two parking lots. Then I threw one leg over the seat, grabbed onto the handlebars, and started to pedal.

 

Leading the

China let herself into her sister’s apartment. “Where’s Brian? I didn’t see his car.”

Sally clicked off the TV. “Bar.”

“Again?” China tugged her suitcase in and then locked the door. “He’s not going out to avoid me because I come so much, is he?”

“No.” Sally patted the couch. “It’s his letdown at the end of the week.”

Every week?” China perched on the edge of a cushion that swallowed her.

Sally shrugged.

“Doesn’t that worry you?” China reached down and unhooked her shoes, then wiggled her toes free and rotated her ankles.

“Nah.” Sally leaned back into the sofa, her small body enveloped in its too-soft folds. “He’ll get a cab.”

“And I’ll be happy to run one of you up to get the car in the morning, but I meant… doesn’t it bug you to spend every Friday night alone? You could go with him. I can let myself in.”

“It’s boring. Him and six other drunks talking shop all night.”

“It seems like you’re ignoring a problem.” China picked up the remote control and turned it over in her hands.

“You’re single,” said Sally. “You don’t get it.”

“But I’ve dated…”

“Marriage isn’t like dating.” Sally’s voice rose for a moment, but it quickly softened. “Marriage is as much about being willing to not-see as it is about loving each other.”

“But…”

“And I’m not the only one closing my eyes. You see that spot in the wall?” Sally pointed to a jagged hole in the plaster.

“My God, did he…”

“Brian didn’t do that, Sis. I did.”

“But you’re so quiet.

“You know how angry I get. Sometimes, the rage comes up in me like the tide, and my hands have to do something or I’ll choke.”

“But that’s…I don’t believe you could have done that.” China heaved herself off the couch to study the wounded wall.

From her cocoon in the sofa, Sally chuckled. “Now who’s the blind one?” she asked.

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Happy Fall

Fall may be the season of cooler temperatures and leaf-raking, but for me, fall truly begins with my daughter’s birthday. Every Year since 2003, The Autumnal Equinox has been my sweet Caroline’s time. Happy birthday, Ducks.

Love, Mama

 

 

 

First Day

“How was your day?” I buckled Sam’s seatbelt then climbed back in front while Caroline hooked her own.

Caroline said, “It was AWESOME! I get to be in classroom B, and I’m only with one of the Katies, but it doesn’t matter because I get to go up to C and D for reading and math and spelling, and language, and writing, and I have the best seat ever in all the classrooms, and I’m right next to my one Katie in homeroom…”

When she paused to inhale, I jumped in. “Sam, how about you?”

“I like my teacher.”

The barrage from his sister’s side resumed. “… and I’ll get to see the other Katie at recess sometimes, but not today, but I saw Sam today, and there’s this one kid in his class who’s really a bully, and nobody likes him, but if he’d be nice we’d all want to play with him because he’s got cute ears…” Another breath.

“Remember, that little boy is learning how to be a good friend, too.” I know this school. I know the stance on bullying. And he’s a kindergartener, just like Sam. I’m inclined to give him the benefit of the doubt. “You and Sam don’t always remember to use your words either.”

“Well there’s a girl in Sam’s class who barely uses any words at all, and she’s just very quiet, and I wanted to be a good friend to her today, but I had to go to my own class, so I hope it’s OK that just her teacher helped her, but I was worried about her, and I think she had to maybe change her clothes.”

Caroline rattled along for the rest of the drive, but Sam didn’t say another word. Sam was always quiet about school. He is always quiet about school. He’s had a rough time, and last year was the worst. Much like the child his sister was so blithely calling a bully, Sam has been known to hit instead of using his words. And when he does use those words, he isn’t always chanting the company message of peace and love.

Many parents send their children off to the first day of kindergarten with a mixture of fear and nostalgia. Not a few weep for the passage into another stage of childhood. I sent Sam in with a desperate kind of hope. Please, let this work. Let this fall be better. My kids attend a school for children with Asperger’s Syndrome, High Functioning Autism, or ADD/ADHD.  It’s Sam’s first year there. I know the teachers and staff are well equipped to love my little boy even when he is a less than stellar human being.

And yet I also know he carries with him the heartache of a preschool expulsion followed by a school that did not understand autism.  I spent a lot of last year placating that second school’s principal while simultaneously thinking Discipline does not cure autism. And I know I only experienced half the dread that my little guy endured each day. We didn’t go more than one whole week without a major incident there, some of them spurred by legitimate concerns, others caused when the school overreacted to minor rules infractions and exacerbated bad situations.

So my fears for Sam’s first day of kindergarten were nothing like a typical mother’s. I wasn’t worrying, “Will he make friends?” or “Will he fit in?” I was fretting, “Will he hit anyone with a rock? Will he bite somebody? And will his teacher be able to guide him to be a good friend if he does?”  In some ways, it was a relief to hear Caroline nattering on about some other child exhibiting these behaviors. She would have as willingly told on Sam as the stranger-child. If she wasn’t mentioning it, then Sam made it through the day without anything outwardly falling apart.

And yet, he still had only answered one question.

In fact, by the time we got home, Sam had fallen asleep in the back seat. But he woke up when I opened his door. Spontaneously, he said, “Look! I got a sticker from the treasure chest today!”

“That’s great!” I told him. “Why did you go to the treasure chest?”

“Because I beed good all day long, and my teacher was proud of me.”

He trooped past me into the house and began loudly demanding snacks.

“Coming!”  I used the edge of my shirt to dab my eyes. He had a good first day. He went to the treasure chest. He beed good. It didn’t mean every day would be great, but the year started right. He came home happy instead of dread filled. I collected his bookbag and whispered thanks into the zipper pouches, because his teacher wasn’t there for me to hug.

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Trick or Treat

Laura tugged the pumpkin suit over her ample stomach. “Still fits.” She smiled at her reflection, but a triple twinge in her abdomen told her bending down had been a bad idea.

“Every pregnant lady does ‘pumpkin’ for Halloween.” Her fiancé watched from the bed.

“Only the vastly pregnant ones, Sherman.” She turned to view herself in profile and strapped on the stem-shaped hat. The twinge intensified.

“You were a pumpkin last time.”

“No I wasn’t.” Laura hated Braxton Hicks. She had been dealing with them on and off for four days now, and the last three hours had been worse. But she refused to miss her second and surely final chance to trick or treat in her pumpkin suit.

“I remember, because we’d just gotten engaged, and the ring looked glitzy in comparison to the costume.”

“If you recall, I never made it to trick or treat.” She gave him a glance above her glasses. “Besides, Shelby is three now. It’s like a whole new costume after so long.”  And we’re still engaged, and the ring is still glitzy.

“You ought to do something unique. Paint a mural on your stomach and wear a bikini.”

“No. Not just no, but hell no.” But thanks for the vote of confidence. She tossed out a wink to soften the words.

“Are you ready, Mama?” Shelby trooped in, Spiderman cape trailing behind her.

“Tell Grandma it’s time to get in the wagon.”

Shelby thundered away down the hall shouting, “Grandma, let’s go!”

Laura sat on the bed and breathed in deeply, in through the nose and out through the mouth.

“Hey.” Sherman crawled up close. “Are you…?”

“Probably.” The pain let go, and Laura stood up again. “I will not miss trick or treat. But take my bag out to the car. I’ll be ready to go as soon as we get home. I doubt Shelby lasts long this year.”

“I hope not,” Sherman rubbed his own stomach and frowned. “I sure do hope not.”

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We’re showing off our ample selves at Trifecta this week.

This post is dedicated to the real Laura, who was sixteen and pregnant a lifetime ago at Chatfield College. I don’t know where you are now, but you were a wonderful friend, and I have never forgotten you or your adorable pumpkin costume sitting in the computer lab.

Great White

The Great White Shark flossed her incisors. “The better to eat you with, my dear,” she murmured to the mirror. It was the wrong line, from the wrong fairy tale, but the Brothers Grimm didn’t have any stories about a big toothy fish she could draw from. And it fit the case. It was what the defendant had repeated to his victim when he killed her. His bite marks on her body were some of the strongest evidence in the trial. That and the eyewitness testimony from her daughter.

In the kitchen, the Shark’s husband handed her a travel mug with hot coffee, Raven’s Brew. Best Christmas gift he had ever given her. “Do you get to cross examine today, Jan?”

She took the mug. “Finally.”

Her husband clacked his teeth. Normally, he wouldn’t have taken an interest in a case; he would have only known a limited amount about it. It was unusual for the city’s Prosecuting Attorney to handle this kind of trial, the stabbing death of a thirty year old black prostitute. It might not even have been thoroughly investigated except for the circumstances. But this was about much more than a single woman and her killer.  That clack meant, Eat him up. Jan kissed her husband. She clacked her teeth back.

She had fought to keep this trial closed to the public because of its gruesome nature, and because the defendant was a charismatic gang leader. But she lost that battle, and the courthouse was more like a circus grounds with the defendant arriving each day in ever more elaborate limousines with ever more obsequious chauffeurs. The judge who had granted bail was right about one thing: Shaun Devry was anything but a flight risk. He liked the way his neatly braided cornrows looked in the limelight. But, in the end, Jan was glad he had insisted upon his sixth amendment rights. All of his charisma couldn’t stand up against his dental records and a soft spoken ten year old girl.

Makiah Henderson was as tough on the inside as she appeared to be weak on the outside. Her vehement certainty had driven police and prosecutors from the beginning. The responding officers reported that she was quaking when she crawled out from under the bed where her mother’s body sprawled. But she whispered the same thing over and over. “Shaun Devry killed the best Mama I ever had. You go put him in prison. Ain’t that what you cops do?”

Jan used a mock courtroom as part of the girl’s preparation. She had expected the child to be so intimidated by the setting that she might make a poor witness.  Children were rarely comfortable in such adult surroundings. But she found that the only instruction Makiah needed was to speak loudly and enunciate clearly.  Makiah walked to Jan at their first meeting and asked, “Can I see your teeth?”

“My teeth? What for?”

“Aunt Tish swears they come out of your mouth just like a shark’s.”

Jan bared an awkward grin and even let Makiah tap her incisors until the girl was satisfied that the prosecutor’s bite was only metaphorical. After that, she was a model witness. She was steadfast in her testimony, and nothing Jan said could rattle her from her position. In preparation, and again in court, she said, “Shaun was mad because he said Mama stole some money off of him.”

“How much money?” Jan asked.

“He say… said a thousand.”

Jan hated the next question, because it felt like putting the victim, instead of the the criminal, on trial. But if she didn’t ask it, the defense attorney would.  “Do you know if she had, in fact, stolen the money?”

“Depends on how you look at it,” said Makiah. “She earned that money working on her back. The way she saw things, he’s the one stole it from her.” In court, the defense attorney challenged that assertion, but the judge let it stand. Makiah was not herself accusing the defendant of anything in this instance. She was simply answering a question.

“Can you tell us what happened on the day your mother was killed.”

“Shaun and Mama used to go around together, back when she was pretty, so he come by to get the money himself. Only she wouldn’t give it to him, and they took to fighting. I was in the bedroom when he busted in, and I hid under the bed.”

The defense attorney tried to turn that statement on Makiah, asking, “If you were under the bed, how could you be sure it was Mr. Devry in the apartment?”

Makiah said, “I know his voice. And I peeped out the door to see what he was going to do to my mama. He never saw me. When I saw he had a knife, I grabbed her phone and got out of sight. But I couldn’t get a signal, and then he chased her into the bedroom and up on the bed. She was bleeding pretty bad, and I was too scared, and I kept quiet. He kept saying, ‘You see these teeth? The better to eat you with, my dear. Give me that money.’”

“And what did your mother say?”

“Not a word. She screamed and screamed, but she didn’t say a thing.”

On the first day of the trial, nine silent women had materialized in the viewing gallery.  They had not missed so much as an hour of the proceedings that followed.  Jan only knew one of them, whom she had prosecuted on a drug charge early in her career, long before she had achieved an elected office.  But she still recognized the pocked scar that ran in a circle on the woman’s cheek. She had always thought it looked like a bite, but now she knew it for sure. It wasn’t hard to guess how she had gotten it, given the current situation. They had never spoken to her, these nine. But Jan felt a connection with the strangers who waited each day.

When Makiah testified, they looped their arms over each other’s shoulders and stared right at the little girl. She looked back at them the whole time she was answering questions. Impossible to say what passed between them, but the child was rock solid. They didn’t grant news interviews, although their daily arrival together in identical sleeveless dresses certainly garnered media attention.  All of them were marked in some way. Lateisha, the one Jan knew from the years-old drug prosecution, had the most visible wound, that white scar on her black cheek. Jan thought, though she couldn’t be sure, that this was Makiah’s Aunt Tish, the one who told the girl that the prosecutor had a retractable jaw. Another woman was missing an earlobe. Still another had an oblong mark on her shoulder.  A third carried a series of cuts on her collarbone. Jan had an idea that, had she wished to do so, she could have devoted a week’s testimony to the  women Shaun Devry had bitten or maimed and still not interviewed all his victims.

She felt them sitting behind her all day long, and every time she got up, she felt a palpable rush of emotion. It rode forward with her to the witness stand or the judge’s bench. Once, she looked back and caught Lateisha’s eye. The woman nodded to Jan, almost imperceptibly, like she was saying Yes, you did feel that. That was our energy blowing in your sails. And then Jan moved on like nothing had happened. It wouldn’t do to expose her secret weapon.

Today, Jan didn’t even turn her head as she joined her team.  She didn’t need to look to feel the row of women at her back. Everyone rose as the judge entered.  Then, they sat and he called the courtroom to order.

The defendant resumed the stand, where he had spent the better part of the day before suggesting that Makiah was so distraught by her mother’s death that she had been in error to point to him and say, “That man. He’s the one that killed my best Mama. “

Today, he was sure to argue that the bite marks found on the victim’s body didn’t match his teeth, even though the dentist who had recently pulled two of those teeth had already been subpoenaed and had given evidence.  Based on his testimony when his own lawyer led him through the dance, Shaun planned to claim the dentist, too, had him confused with someone else. Someone who happened to have the same name and bite pattern except for two extra  teeth on the bottom.

Jan did not expect his cocky demeanor to waver in the face of her cross examination, but she thought his attitude would hurt his status with the jury rather than helping him. There were parents in that box, parents who had wept when Makiah looked at them one by one, like she was memorizing their faces.

Shaun Devry threw a shining white grin in Jan’s direction, and she forced her own body and face to remain neutral. If he thought he could charm her, so much the better. The easier to twist his own words upon him. The better to eat him with.

When the time came, Jan got up to begin her cross examination. She drew in a deep breath through her nose. She liked what she smelled. There was blood in the water, and Shaun Devry, beaming around the courtroom like the guest star on a morning talk show, didn’t seem to realize it was his own. She approached the stand without opening her mouth, savoring that red iron odor. Behind her closed lips, the Great White Shark clacked her teeth. Never had she looked so forward to doing her job.

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For the Scriptic prompt exchange this week, Cheney gave me this prompt: Tell the story of a shark attack..

I gave Diane this prompt: Blood rained down from the ceiling, but Jack refused to acknowledge it. His wife came in for breakfast and looked up. “Stupid demon,” she muttered. “Can we just eat at I-Hop today?”

Teeth

Sherry the hygienist scraped along my gumline. “I did this funhouse for Halloween last year,” she said. “They had me dressed up as the little kid in that Freddy Kreuger song.” She hummed a few notes of the movie’s eerie minor-key version of the old “one, two, buckle my shoe” rhyme.

“That’s freaky.” I didn’t use any consonants, because she had a gloved hand and a dental pick jammed in my mouth, but she understood me anyway. In the background, the dentist’s drill whined as he filled another patient’s cavity.

“I know. It completely flipped this one woman out. She like ran back to the entrance.” Sherry giggled and adjusted the sunglasses protecting me from the bright light shining in my mouth. Then, she suctioned out my extra spit. She had no idea how badly I wanted to run back to the entrance right now, how tightly I was bracing for the machine at her left elbow.

My mouth was temporarily free of instruments, so instead of fleeing, I asked, “Where was it?”

“Out in Wetumpka. You’d love it.”

“I bet.” Yes, please. Give me Freddy and Jason over dental hygiene.

“Hey, Marcy,” she called to another passing hygienist. “Is the network up yet? I want to drop her X-Rays.”

“No,” Marcy replied. “We’re still in blanksville.”

Sherry resumed the plaque removal and the distant drill’s whine ceased. In the silence, I heard the sound system. “This is Faith Radio 89.1 WLBF Montgomery.” I tried not to listen to God’s word of the day, but I couldn’t miss that it was from the book of James. Too bad the radio hadn’t gone down with the computers.

“You have another one this year?” I asked, again without consonants.

“Yeah, and we do a pumpkin ride during the day for the little kids.”  She wiggled her pick between two teeth. “Hang on a sec. That one’s wanting to bleed.” She dabbed my jaw and suctioned it, then resumed the assault on my gums.

We talked like that, horror movies and haunted houses, most of my sentences emerging in a string of vowels, until she was through stabbing me. Then, she started in with the electric toothbrush, and I tried not to moan. She could have poked me with those plaque scrapers all day, and I would have jabbered through the pain. But that toothbrush motor whined just exactly like the drill, and it rattled my head, especially when she bumped my teeth with the handle. I imagined I could smell my own teeth burning, just like I can when I have to get a filling.

Sherry finished at about the same time that the electronics recovered.  I laid back and tried to unclench while I waited. The monitor to my right awoke with pictures of every tooth in my head, labeled with all of my fillings. “You say you take Wellbutrin?” Doctor Hudson’s smile appeared above my head. He stuffed a pick in my mouth.

“Uh-huh.”

“That explains the thick saliva I’m seeing. Sherry, send her home with a sample of the biotene. Just replace your toothpaste and mouthwash with that.” He probed a tooth. “Put a watch on four and five.” Sherry wrote on the chart and the dentist took the obstruction out of my mouth to spin around and bring up the actual X-ray images.

I said, “You’ve been putting watches on four and five for the last three years.” Don’t talk about that. Watches lead to fillings, and fillings are worse than cleanings. Far, far worse. 

He turned back to my mouth from the machine. “I’m going to tap this one and listen really closely. Remind me who diagnosed it ankylosed.” He took the pick out of my mouth so I could talk.

“I don’t know. My dentist when I was 13 or 19 or something.” I didn’t tell him that the dentists all run together in my mind, back to the guy who didn’t believe in giving kids novacaine, that when I wasn’t sitting in his office, his face joined that parade of nameless men and women who shook my skull until my teeth bled and made my gums hurt for days.

“Huh. Well.” He tapped the tooth. It did not hurt. “Yup. Sounds ankylosed to me. Got a really distinct tinny ring. If you don’t brush any other tooth in your head, brush that one. Other than that, it all looks good. Are you due for a panoramic?”

Sherry broke in. “We couldn’t do that one because of the computers.”

“OK, well, make sure to get her on the way out the door. I want to make sure the jaw around that ankylosed tooth isn’t growing anything unusual.”

“What do you mean unusual?” He didn’t have anything in my mouth, so I could ask with perfect clarity.

“It’s got a funny shape.”

“That’s because I’ve had two teeth pulled around the ankylosed one.” I didn’t add my favorite refrain. I’d rather have a tooth pulled than filled any day.

“Yeah, but sometimes those backfill funny. I just want to make sure it’s normal.”

I started to say something, but realized that I wasn’t concerned. The cleaning was over. No fillings in my future. I was free to leave the office.

As I walked away, the dentist seemed to be floating along with the Christian rock and the singer who was promising to follow, follow, follow his lord. It didn’t matter to me. I couldn’t get my final X-Ray and get out the door fast enough. I handed over my co-pay to the sounds of the DJ, who was promising all of us eternal life, but who had nothing to offer on the topic of healthy teeth.

Three

“Run babies, run babies, run.” The farmer’s wife studied the cat crouched over its kill, tail twitching.  She disinfected her carving knife with a rag. “Two down, pussy,” she purred. “One to go.”

This weekend, for its 33rd edition, Trifextra is asking for 33 words that use the Rule of 3 in some way.

Radical

Three days after the fire, the survivors gathered near the restaurant’s still smoldering ruins. “We rebuild,” Anton argued. He smacked his fist into his palm. In his broken English, he tried to explain. “We do not put it back up, then who wins? Huh?”

The men and women who had worked in and owned this building shifted under his gaze. Joshua gave voice to what the others were thinking. “But Chaz died.”

Anton spit. “That’s more reason, not less.”

Joshua said, “Merrin ought to lead the decision. He was her husband.” Murmurs of agreement met his statement.

Merrin looked at the ground. “You know what they call this place?” She looked straight at Anton.

“Yah.” He didn’t flinch under her gaze. “Hell Cafe.” He spat again. “They are not all.”

“No,” Merrin said. “But there are people who are just as happy to eat our food as see us burn. The commune is a radical departure from their way of life.”

“So . . . what?” Anton held out his hands to her as if in supplication. “The police see a dead man, they maybe listen.”

Merrin said, “I’m torn, but I know what Chaz. . . .” She seemed to struggle with her husband’s name. It rolled out of her mouth with a hiccup. “He would have said,  ‘Dig in’. He’d be pissed if we gave up now.” Tears ran down her cheeks.

“You want to rebuild,then?” Joshua asked.

Merrin nodded. “We have to.”

“Yah!” Anton leaped into the air and pumped one fist. The others gathered around Merrin, and then he came too. They joined hands in a circle around the young widow. Joshua started to sing. “I’m gonna lay down my burdens, down by the riverside.”

One by one, they raised their voices, even noisy off-key Anton. Together, they stood at the site of their own personal war, singing songs of peace and hope.

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We’re getting all radical this week at Trifecta.

http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2012/09/trifecta-week-forty-two.html

And

For the Scriptic.org prompt exchange this week, Cameron at http://camerondgarriepy.com gave me this prompt: The Hell Cafe.

I gave SAM at http://frommywriteside.wordpress.comthis prompt: A woman finds three sacred objects